Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the influence of well structured building on the life and working environment of the people. Some people think that the design of the building will bear negative impact on an individual, while others maintain that the architecture and design of the building will influence the life and working style of people in a positive manner. This essay will discuss the positive impacts of building on a person’s mind, health and working style.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the design of the building. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that people working in well designed and structured building will feel proud and this feeling would motivate and encourage them to work with more enthusiasm. Not only the design of the buidling will motivate the working class but also the safety mesaures pertaining to electrical wiring and evacuation incase of fire breakdown will bear a direct impact on the phscological needs of people. As a matter of fact, the design of the building has far more out reaching positive impacts as it encompasses the phsycological needs of the people.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet with regards to the design of the building, that proponents are not cognizant is the exposure of its resident to the sunlight. As an example, a recent study has revaealed that more than 40 percent of today’s population is Vitamin D deficient. Hence, a well designed building with large windows augments towards the health of the people. As a result, a well designed building has far out reaching effects on the health of an individual.
To recapitulate, aforementioned discussion propounds plausible arguments that fulfillment of phsycological needs, motivation in work and exposure to sunlight are advantages of well designed buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23666666667 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92926042998 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1014106133 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.916666667 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438783300267 0.242375264174 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159602431013 0.0925447433944 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12985732749 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253457544128 0.151781067708 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174081549754 0.0609392437508 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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