The world’s government and organisations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give solution?
Nowadays the world has various problems. Some of them are old and others are new and the effect is also different. In my opinion, global warming is the most dangerous issue because it effects directly all the planet even if they are plants or animals. And with this attitude to take some prevention is really hard and may be impossible.
Global warming influences not just one area; all counties, all the people, animals and plants and we can say that it effects also our future. Many causes of global warming are grounded by people and city life. For most researcher the most dangerous habits are; the usage of personal cars and the use of non recyclable plastic in almost every area and product. Actually in the history, even when our grandparents were youngs, prevalence of this habits were not this much. Of course world is in another situation now.
However governments and organisations should take responsibility. They can try to improve the knowledge of people or they can limit the usage of cars and plastics and keep under control the factories. According to many studies with true strategies the world can be rescued.
There are many issues in the world. But global warming should be the most important one. Because if the necessary responsibilities won't be taken the result of this problem would be the end of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86899563319 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60461955375 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2909330724 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139452040363 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517228571606 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461977919099 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839585959373 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211436725526 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 12.6369458128 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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