A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- Thank her for the present and say why you like it.
- Describe some other presents that you received
- explain some of the things you did on your birthday.
Dear Hu,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. Last birthday is the most unforgettable birthday I have ever had. The gift you gave to me is real wonderful, especially for its usefulness. I really need a bookmark, because I read a lot for the final exam right now and I do not have that many bookmarks. With no more bookmarks, I have to use other small things like bus tickets or rulers, these objects sometimes makes paper dirty. As a bookworm, I really hate that. I bet you thought a lot about what to give me as present. Thank you so much, you are so sweet.
I also received some other gifts from my family, my father gived me a science-fiction novel; my mother gived me a watch. I love these presents.
Not only your presents makes me so happy, but also some activites I did in my birthday. I took a long trip with my dog, which is planed a long time ago, but did not have time to realize it. I met some guys along the trip, we go to the bar and had a little dance together. These helped me relaxed a lot before I dive into the sprint of the final exam.
Real thanks for your gifts,
Yours,
Di
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17050691244 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37660273621 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6926910607 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274799340358 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835075726858 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774135061219 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155291119771 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761793232903 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.