technology and new inventions is it beneficial or detrimental to the society?
In today's scenario, the world is accelerating and each day there is a new invention is coming in front of us. The importance of whether the recently developed technologies and innovations are beneficial to the society or not was always a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that recent developments and inventions are widespread in every field and it is beneficial to mankind. Others reject this notion and argue that advancements in technology have the impact on human relationships and health. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would elaborate both sides and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, innovations and developments in technology have benefited mankind in the field of science, media, telecom, medicine, study, applying jobs and many more. For example, when we think about innovation and technology first thing that comes to our mind is computers. Computers are invented to help mankind to perform their daily routine activities. It helps us to get the required information of any field related to banks, schools, jobs, medicine, travel, cooking and many more.
However, there are many disadvantages of advancements in the development of recent technology. Humans spend most of the time on the computer and smartphones which is leading to health issues. Most of the people are addicted to the technology innovations like play stations, games which halt their brain development. For example, innovation of smartphones made people become lazier and decrease in physical activities.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to point that development and advancements in technology has made human life much easier. In a nutshell, even though innovations has many disadvantages, but its benefits outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...is accelerating and each day there is a new invention is coming in front of us. The importanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46830985915 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14074046122 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5081797517 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184885758226 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053438643997 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624282519954 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102296321524 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926383151184 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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