Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people often argued that noise pollution has become exaggerated and make legislation over that. While some others perception, sound will be once own decision and they can produce as much as they want. In this essay I reckon that, keep calm would be more beneficial than unnecessary noise.
On the one hand, detrimental effect on extra huge noise would be health, peace, and so on. People often complained about the significant changes on their life by unwanted loud sounds. Such big noise may be by factories, vehicles or else even at school side. Which would be affected by psychological in terms of lack of peace, or by hearing problem as well. For instance, noise control department in Malaysia explain that local people who living in factory side has hearing problem and emotional problem has risen significantly. Furthermore, WHO published a notice that noise pollution also become a dangerous criteria to be solved.
On the other hand, people who owns factories, officers who uses vehicles, thinks that noise would be an outcome of some indispensable facts. Irrespective of noise such machines provide good trades and commercial exhibits. So that some sounds might be adjust with someone who oppose. Moreover, some delegates explain that noise could be a mans rights to produce even if it is huge or mild. For example, school children are often make loud noise during their free periods.
In my perception, pop across noise might be a damaging health issue to every one. Control over loud sound would be good enough to reduce hearing loss and mental disturbances at least a while. Although let students to become active at once, instruct them to have had a discipline in terms of noise. However, which would be built up a sound controlled society as well.
In conclusion, noise is always an effect of some machinery, vehicles and so on. Nevertheless to be controlled over some extra vibrant sound must is better to some extend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00307692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64302140176 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0816839112 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287227944827 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836919571476 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607621773746 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169620338957 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628897056539 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.