The following appears in a letter to the editor for the West Lansburg News:
"The tufted groundhog lives in the coastal wetlands of West Lansburg. Ancient records suggest that the tufted groundhog once numbered in the millions. Since they were declared a wildlife sanctuary in 2004, development along the coastal wetlands has been prohibited. Now local development interests are lobbying for the West Lansburg council to allow an access road to be built along the edge of wetlands. Neighboring Eastern Carpenteria, which had a similar sanctuary, has seen its sea otter population decline since the repeal of its sanctuary status in 1978. In order to preserve the region's biodiversity and ensure a healthy environment, the West Lansburg council should not allow the road to be built."
There is no objection to point that humans are cutting down forest for infrastructure development which is affecting the biodiversity. The argument here is thet West Lansburg council should not allow the road to be built in order to preserve biodiversity of the region and ensure healthy enviroment.
For building roads , several trees have to be cut down which can affect habitant of sanctury. But groundhogs doest not live on trees . So there will not be much threat for groundhogs. There can till be live safely as there are sheltered safely underground. Here survey claims that there were numbered millions. So decrease in number of groundhogs can have different reasons like new species might have added to food chain which is depend omn groudhogs. Else it might be other environmental effect.
Here, Decline in Sea otter is compared with groudhogs which is completely irrelevant as groudhogs are ground habitant and sea otters are water habitant. So decrease in sea otter population might be because increase in water temperature due to global warming or it might be because of inceased water pollution. So comparing it with other sanctury result in vague results.
Also, example given here is of 1970's which could not be applicable on current situation as awareness among the people to save wildlife has now increased. Council can given permission to build the road with proper
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ealthy enviroment. For building roads , several trees have to be cut down which...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
.... But groundhogs doest not live on trees . So there will not be much threat for gr...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...might have added to food chain which is depend omn groudhogs. Else it might be other e...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, Decline in Sea otter is compared with groudhogs which is completely irrelevant...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'give' or 'be given'?
Suggestion: give; be given
...wildlife has now increased. Council can given permission to build the road with prope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 28.8173652695 17% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 441.139720559 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13215859031 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74515891795 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.468620217663 131% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 705.55239521 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4073209708 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2142857143 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 5.70786347227 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839873965124 0.218282227539 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036416061693 0.0743258471296 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462525244408 0.0701772020484 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465751293875 0.128457276422 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474362764412 0.0628817314937 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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