Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
By and large, it's established beyond the doubt that young people have a critical roles to build the future of each society, thus, it is really important to pat attention to them and consider their reuirments. As a whole, government does not consider the modern society needs to be constructed with new power. Today according to the development of technology and knowledge young people should have critical participant for achiveing their goals; hence, I firmly disagree with this idea that young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of the society on account of many reasons which two of them are as follows:
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that government try to utilize the old experts which have lots of experiances, but according to the modern society, we need the youth for injecting the fresh energy. As matter of the fact, almost young people do not have appropriate jobs and even have irrevalant works. When the young people are far from the making the decisions for their society, it is clear that not only they are not influential but also have negative effect of the society. It is noticeable to be mentioned that if the young people lease their motivation, they will miss their talent. Although, the experience is really effective but next to them fresh talent will accelerate the improvment of the society.
Furthermore, one of the important factor in the modern society is that they increase the utilizing the new technology by fresh worker. The young people have many experiences in the context of technology which is really critical for making the society better. It is clear that if one society never move according to the technology, their fate will unknow in the future. By way of example, in the context of industerialization, young people with their impetus directly can help the government with perfect experiences; hence, the dramatic roles of the young people in the future of the society will be determined. But when the government try to continue their decision according to the traditional ways, not only young people will remove from the society but also all people will affected very bad.
To put it all in nutshell, the role of young people for making the best society is incredible and the majority of modern society by utilizing them could be succeeded. Thus, the government should be evaluated every things and managed them for preparing the conditions and used the young people as new power. For making the best society, we need to be clever and organize in this context.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...doubt that young people have a critical roles to build the future of each society, th...
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Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...om the society but also all people will affected very bad. To put it all in nutshell,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, thus, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94919168591 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67108814963 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413394919169 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.831358919 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.866666667 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8666666667 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31761992293 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11104920074 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789471681275 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212291219034 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117632956825 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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