Relationship plays a vital part in our lives as it’s closely related to our happiness. Nevertheless, it’s no easy a task to maintain a relationship. In order to prevail, there’re dozens of principles we’re supposed to obey, for instants, to try putting ourselves into others’ shoes, never to get annoyed easily, to be as humous as we can and so on, among which I think one of the fundamental ones is to always tell the truth.
In the first place, few of us would deny that lies tend to cause gaps between people, no matter out of what kind of purpose they’re told. That’s because lies can give occasion to misunderstandings which may then lead to trust crisis and broken hearts. For example, it’s not uncommon to hear this kind of stories where a husband hide a part of truth form his wife deliberately as in his view the truth will bring his delicate spouse hurt and sorrow, and thus he decide to protect her in this way. Problems rise when the sensitive woman see it through. Frankly, it’s pretty reasonable for her to suspect wether the husband has done something terrible, and she won’t trust him as she used to.
Besides, not only won’t to tell lies do any contribution to unravel the problem, but sometimes makes the situation even worse, where there’s scarce chance to fix the relationship. Supposed that there’s a worker who made a mistake that couldn’t be solved by himself and can possibly hurt one of his coworker’s benefit. From my point of view, the best choice for him is to explain the whole thing to that colleague and deal with the issue with joint effort. Otherwise, if he chooses to hide the fact, out of the dread of being blamed, he will skip the chances both to correct the wrong and to apologize to his partner.
Thus, one shouldn’t tell lies if he want keep the relationship no matter what excuses he has.
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 48
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. 76
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppiness. Nevertheless, it's no easy a task to maintain a relationship. In or...
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Suggestion: from
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...ate spouse hurt and sorrow, and thus he decide to protect her in this way. Problems ri...
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Suggestion: can
... couldn't be solved by himself and can possibly hurt one of his coworker's benefit...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...hus, one shouldn't tell lies if he want keep the relationship no matter what ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, frankly, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for example, i think, kind of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83282674772 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90338635904 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620060790274 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7054317612 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109927908356 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388764504512 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387887522763 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728557292302 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194959712257 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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