Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Mrf70 on Thu, 06/14/2018 - 10:26

By and large, it's established beyond the doubt that children are really important for their parents and parents are more aware of the children's education. An old persian author states that " children ae the corner stone of the society"; hence, this is critical for parents to pay attention to their children's education. Therefore, I firmly agree with this idea that todays parents are more involved in their children's education on account of many reasons two of which as follows.

The first exquisite point to mention is that parents are greatly concern about their children's education and try to find the best school or college for them. In contrast, in the past parents not only did not pay attention to their children's education but also they did not any things about their level. Todays, parents are knowledgable and consider all aspects of the education and try to enhance their children to be perfect in their lessons. Furthermore, according to the development of technology, parents know that if their children can be successed in their education, they will lost appropriate position and job in the future due to any things are based on science and knowledge. Hence, parents try to find the best school or callage, also, their children have sheduel for study, play and entertainment. Thus, todays parents are very responsible about their children's education in compare to the past.

Moreover, Parents always try to upbringing their children based on newest knowlege and science according to the modern society. Nowdays, parents try to grow their children in appropriate place, the children next to the school and collage go to the extra classes because parents want their children being very successful in their life. Hence, always children learn more than two foriegn languages next to the modern language. However in the past, some parents did not let their children go to school specially their girls and they wanted their children work and earn money. Consecouently, today parents are more pay attention to their children's education because they know the knowlege is indispenseble in their life.

To put it all in nutshell, according to the above reasons, I agree that today parents are more involved to their children educaion. As whole, it is noticeable to be mentioned that when we have best parents which are aware about their children, we will have special society in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...successed in their education, they will lost appropriate position and job in the fut...
^^^^
Line 6, column 426, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... languages next to the modern language. However in the past, some parents did not let t...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11898734177 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62521513909 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440506329114 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7914423256 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363055830591 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172695825043 0.076458572812 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066488303087 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266797646474 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044564986476 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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