Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The business manager of the television station is of the view that they should devote more time to weather and local news. This suggestion comes from the fact that since they have devoted their late night news program to covering more national news instead of weather and local news, there have been many complaints from viewers. The business manager failed to give proper arguments for the complaints.
Firstly, The business manager mentioned that the complaints are regarding the weather and local news but he did not clearly mention what the people are willing to get whether they want more news about whether or it is due to false news about the weather or fake national news. Also, he failed to check whether the complaints are from valid users or from anyone who wants to decrease their popularity by making the news channel to turn their direction in a negative way.
Secondly, The business manager told that the advertising contracts are being canceled but he failed to take into consideration why they canceled the contract. He should make sure that the companies canceled due to their financial crisis or because they are unable to make money due to the advertisement. He should also look into the issue whether they canceled only at this time of the program or entirely with the television channel because there is a chance that the advertising company might think that the customers can be attracted at a particular time in the evening than night time as many of the people who watch television is during evening than night.
Finally,The argument fails to establish the exact reason behind the complaints of the viewers and cancellation of advertising contracts. The manager should think logically and come to a better conclusion after going through the above given discussion.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- you don't have.
Need to argue against the conclusion always. For this topic it is:
Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1473 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.91 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.476 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.873 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.667 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.211 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...he news channel to turn their direction in a negative way. Secondly, The business manager tol...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e there is a chance that the advertising company might think that the customers ...
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Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dvertising company might think that the customers can be attracted at a particul...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...uring evening than night. Finally,The argument fails to establish the exact r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 2260.96107784 67% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03010033445 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54382071185 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498327759197 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7049564773 57.8364921388 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4 119.503703932 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 23.324526521 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.70786347227 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301532817381 0.218282227539 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113091948227 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123246718322 0.0701772020484 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179455699252 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131378325323 0.0628817314937 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.3550499002 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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