Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is a waste of money for government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.
It is beyond dispute that all aspect of science deserves respect. Since the dawn of the humanity, people have been curious about the life beyond the earth. They postulated numerous hypothesis about it; therefore, there have been heating debate among perspectives. With all respect that I have to astronomy, I believe that governments should not allocate a huge amount of money to fund space exploration. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my most convincing reasons.
First and foremost, without shadow of doubs, we have more pivotal issues to concern about, like fossil fuels. As we are aware, our beloved earth is running out of fossil fuels, as soon as it is possible, it should be replaced by renewable energies like solar, geothermal, wind, to name but a handful. Moreover, they have the most negative impact on global warming ensuing from air pollution. Fossil fuels not only change the ecosystem but also is conducive to many diseases like respiratory disease or cancer. Although we have had a broad spectrum of investigation about clean energies, hardly have they exercised in real conditions. So I believe that instead of funding some outer space researches that do not have any repercussion on such crucial dilemmas, It is better to take proper measures to tackle the earth’s problems.
Having discussed the issue from previous points of view, I want to focus on the subject from another facet. However, we can witness progressive and monumental achievement in space engineering, like in the field of material engineering, these attainments are not tangible and advantageous to most of the people in the world. In other words, these achievements are not practical in nowadays world. For instance, the last time I checked the youtube, I read a news about a new planet that is found far away from our solar system. Not only do I consider it as news, but also I am pretty sure that it has the less impact on our preeminent problems with which we are facing on our planet.
All in all, I do not deny the importance of the space researches, but with all respect, I am on the opinion that we have priority and superiority in our world which require strict attempts to tackle the problems. Besides, the people who become aware of monumental achievements about space exploration do not consider it as important as our pivotal problems in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to respect'
Suggestion: to respect
...ute that all aspect of science deserves respect. Since the dawn of the humanity, people...
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Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y repercussion on such crucial dilemmas, It is better to take proper measures to ...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...s, these achievements are not practical in nowadays world. For instance, the last time I ch...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...last time I checked the youtube, I read a news about a new planet that is found far aw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95989974937 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79264355896 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558897243108 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.961141015 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.944444444 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11264750884 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351362713772 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559200335219 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761854233136 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320809669287 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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