You should not believe everything you read in the newspaper.
I agree with statement that you should not believe everything you read in the newspaper. Reading newspaper is daily habit of many people. Newspaper is good source of information about what is happening, in the world,in the area of politics, sports and entertainment. It provides information about current issues and trendings. It influences our society in many ways.However, there are some seious reasons that questions credibility newspaper content.
Firstly, Nowadays electronic media is more popular than newspaper. Internet connection is very cheap and televisions are almost in every house. Other than that there many newspaper firms that it creates cut-throat competition. To survive in this competition not only newspaper companies but other media are modifying news in such a way that to attract more customers. They are modifying news to make it more entertaining and exaggerated for readers and viewers. In this process many times they change its original information. It is many time in wrong direction than true fact.
Secondly, there is always race of showing news first or breaking news. In this race sometimes newspaper editors do not check truthfullness of that news. Directly write that news whithout knowing it may be a false information or a half information. These really creates trusting issue with news content. As I remember, In during rumors of chemical hazard in our area, many newspapers wrote about news of chemical hazard whithout checking it is true or not. Then it became ignition of rumors. It created panic in people.
Additionally, Many powerfull people have ties with newspaper editors and reporters to manipulate news in their favor knowing its influence on people. They give money to change or create news. In election time many polition use this strategy for strengthen their position in voters. Some bussinessman do that for spreading rumors about other competing company products to make them out of competition.
In conclusion, showing and writing news without knowing its truthfullness, Race of breaking news and manipulation of media are some serious issues. It cannot be ignored. So, I suggest not only to newspaper readers but also to people who watch or read news on television and internet, do not believe everything you read or watch in newspaper or in other media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28378378378 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88499936385 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0104569644 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1923076923 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144900725977 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451630987384 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155320534754 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101661614316 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124717457999 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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