Changes in structure and roles of family
It is argued that there is a change in organization and roles of family in recent years. This essay aims to explain more about the aspects of these changes and show my opinion that I totally believe these changes are beneficial to our society.
The changes that take place in structure as well as roles of family can be illustrated in two major perspectives. One of aspects is the shrinkage of family’s size in the modern world compared to the traditional family in previous time. Approximately 30 years ago, a standard family usually consists of at least three generations such as: grandparents, parents and children who often live under one roof, have meals and attend more activities together. However, recently, a normal family includes a single parent and their children who reside in a new house while the grandparents still inhabit in their own one. Another perspective of these changes is that the husband and wife hold equal position in family. In the past, the wife was always considered as a primary cook in the kitchen with a huge amount of housework.
However, thanks to the significant development of social role of women, the normal chore at home are also shared as responsibility of men when they come back their family at home.
In my opinion, I think that these changes are positive due to their undeniable benefits in our community. One of their good points is that the smaller-scaled families allow all members avoid conflicts rather than the big-sized ones. It is because the gap between various generations could lead to the huge different way of thinking, lifestyles and behaviors. Therefore, living in close generations in a family can help people to enhance the bonding, share their idea easily and reach the greater harmony. Another perfect advantage of these changes is that the equal role in family between husband and wife contribute considerably to reduction of gender discrimination and approach of success for women. If the women just concentrate on the housework and do not get the sharing from their men, they are likely to be more stressful and unfair which can cause the bad situations of that relationship. Therefore, the same duties in family’s issues would create a golden opportunity to strengthen their profound love.
In conclusion, the changes in structure and roles in family are about the size and equal responsibility while I believe these changes are really positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ints is that the smaller-scaled families allow all members avoid conflicts rather...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, at least, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05721393035 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86981134968 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554726368159 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.49192924 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.588235294 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413404023892 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141572808666 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148651384713 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273900633582 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125653095067 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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