Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the beginning of history, family plays a prevailing role in everyone's life. In this regard, the support of parents can solve lots of children problems' however, in some cases interminable support makes the kids depended to families that leads parents to make decisions for them. In this case, there is a controversial debate that whether today young people are able to make decisions about their lives rather than past or not. My personal opinion is that nowadays young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives and be autonomous. I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the increase in social awareness leads young people to have a more comprehensive thought of life. In other words, public knowledge has been increased among these centuries and every young person has much knowledge compare to her or his peer in the past. Indeed, this social awareness and public knowledge lead our young community to make better and logical decisions rather than past. Hence, there is no need of parents interfere in making decisions. As a case in point, my father is the last child of his family and he has 30 years difference from his first sibling. In that time my grandparents always made decisions for my elder uncle. In contrast, the grandparents never compelled my father about his pivotal decisions, but what is the difference between my father and his brother for my grandparents? Only a small difference; school. My father went to school, but my uncle did not go and this change persuaded my grandparents that my father had enough knowledge to distinguish right and wrong.
Secondly, the development in communication and social media provide a proper place to share ideas and experiences. To be frank, these days everyone can access a huge amount of information worldwide. Besides, every individual can benefit from others experiences. In this regard, people can check the result of a certain decision prior to doing that. In other words, everyone experiences can be shared throughout the world and not only can young people use them to make the right decision, but also they can share their personal attitudes to help others.
To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that these days young people know how to act and make decisions in their lives without being dependent on their parents. It is well established that the more knowledge you have, the more independency you will have. I highly recommend to parents do not interfere in their young children's lives and lets them decide for their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...their lives rather than past or not. My personal opinion is that nowadays young people are bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, first of all, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96338672769 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70472611561 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512585812357 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2725560689 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5909090909 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363607219355 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104815485193 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115043976753 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249272117505 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130817433199 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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