Company’s top level authorities should get their employees in decision making process. Discuss.
In order to survice the business challenges, the top level authorities in the company must ensure the participation of their low level key employees in the the business decision making process.Few people think that it's an excellent way to leverage the operational knowledge of their employees to derive innovative solution for the business problem or business growth, however few other think that it not wise to include the low profile employees to company's decision making as it may dilute the company's overall vision. This essay will discuess both the view before arriving to the final conclusion.
Low level employees which envolve is company's day to day operations understand the fundamental working process. They know where are the bottlenecks, and how to take advantage by changing market demands in company's favour through their innovative ways. Employees feedbacks are equally important in terms of launching new products or making policies related human resource.For instance; involving employees to improve the operational efficency will be much more
cheaper and faster as compaired to outsourcing it to some other third party consulting firm.
On the other hand, top level executives should also watchful about the level of their involvement. Sometimes it is too dangerous to share the sensitive information with employees because they may pass this information to outsider to gain some incentives. For example, it is very common that employees try to get the sensitive business information or plans and sell them to open market for financial gain.
In conclusion, without shadow of doubt, involving employees into the company's decision making is great way to foster an environment of trust and respect, but in the mean time the executives should also define the clear line for their involvement to avoid any kind of loss or damage to the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33898305085 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83257612494 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.420659053 50.4703680194 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.0 104.977214359 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.9669160288 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.25397266985 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377445595161 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128545598954 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101403388819 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168321716799 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100639745763 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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