Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society
Whenever we think about the technology, the computer's image emarges in our mind. There are lots of reason that the computer can be considered as the greatest invention in humankind which helped society to grow. Computers are helping to shape our society and make it better for everone. It is extremely difficlut to imagine our society without computers.
First of all, computers are instrumental in the development of fields like education, medicine, R&D, space, and agriculture. Developmental in field of education gives society an brand new ways to understand many things. And in the same time, advancements in the field of medicine with the help of computer technology provides a whole new ways to protect ourselves with many pendamic. Secondely, computers are helping us to understand our planet earth by helping humans in space missions.
Moreover, computers can also help in terms of processing large and complex problem within fraction of seconds. For example, it was extremely difficult for Nicolas Tesla - the great scientist, to calculate the equations of physics manually around 100 years back, but now the same equations can be solved effortlessly with the help of computer. Solving problem easily is one of the greatest achivement of our society, and this cannot be possible without computers and related technologies.
In conclusion, computers provide us immerse possibility to grow ourselves invidually and society as a whole. We cannot ignore the fact that computers are helping to shape our mordern society. Without any doubt, computers can be consider as on of the greatest invention which helped our society greately.
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- Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is YOUR opinion? Support it with personal examples. 71
- Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers? 77
- It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree” 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...omputer technology provides a whole new ways to protect ourselves with many pendamic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th by helping humans in space missions. Moreover, computers can also help in ter...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'one'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88559983202 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4697455492 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839811956921 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391661954444 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466814953892 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641299063602 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552415388489 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.