write a letter complaining about accommodation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to an accommodation booked in your hotel through a travel website for three days. As a regular business traveller, I stay in a variety of accommodations but I can say that in my experience, your hotel accommodation has been the worst due to a number of reasons.
Firstly I had booked a deluxe room for three days and had a booking confirmation from your hotel when I reached the hotel i was given a standard room despite the confirmed booking which is unacceptable. The standard room was without the breakfast and airconditioning.I made several complaints to the staff, they assured me that they will change my room the next day to a deluxe room but no action was taken.
I can assure you I am highly dissatisfied with the service and hope that you will take immediate action on this unprofessional misconduct from your staff. As such, I can assure you that have already lost me as your customer due to this incident.
I look forward to your immediate action on this
Yours sincerely
Vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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...n the worst due to a number of reasons. Firstly I had booked a deluxe room for t...
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...rom your hotel when I reached the hotel i was given a standard room despite the c...
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...thout the breakfast and airconditioning.I made several complaints to the staff, t...
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...forward to your immediate action on this Yours sincerely Vinshu
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...diate action on this Yours sincerely Vinshu
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...ion on this Yours sincerely Vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75543478261 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95355809741 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5416036923 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791612010752 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445067889259 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074101715818 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543199520799 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094084916867 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.