write a letter complaining about accommodation
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to give a feedback in reference to a recent stay I had at your hotel for two days. I am a regular business traveller and stay in a variety of accommodations but would like to let you know I was highly dissatisfied with your hotel accommodation due to a number of reasons.
Firstly, I had a confirmed booking for a deluxe room but the accommodation i was given when I arrived at your hotel was a standard room. This room was without air conditioning and despite my repeated requests to change my room no action was taken by the hotel staff.
Secondly, the room was unhygienic with dirty bed sheets, which were not even changed for days.I had requested the receptionist to change the same and replace it with new ones. After repeated requests from my side, the hotel staff came and replaced the bed sheet.
I would like to let you know this kind of unprofessional behaviour is hurting your hotel reputation. As you are also aware that most of the customers nowadays read the reviews before booking an accommodation, similarly bad reviews will definitely have a direct impact on your business.
Thus I would request you to look into this matter and take necessary action as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for a deluxe room but the accommodation i was given when I arrived at your hotel ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s, which were not even changed for days.I had requested the receptionist to chang...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e a direct impact on your business. Thus I would request you to look into this m...
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71875 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7768251892 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6347150001 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.051991364832 0.216113520407 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198132999869 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341998074182 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0274844711543 0.12726935374 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417380728775 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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