Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for students to read books about real events than it is for them to read novels.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Students are recommended to read books in their leisure times. Some parents and teachers believe that reading books about real events is more important than reading novels. They believe that reading real events increases the students’ knowledge. However, when I think so carefully, I find it is not correct to consider the books about real events more important than novels. I believe reading novels has some advantages for students.
First, reading novels is a good practice to strengh writing skill. There are many intresting and poetic sentences in novels. Also novels usually contain beautiful descriptive statements about life, love, nature and so on. As a result reading novels is very usefull for students intrested in writing and poetry. When I was fifteen I read some famous novels in my leisure times. I learned a lot of litrature points from these books, such as idioms, proverbs and new words. Once I read a new word or beautiful proverb, I wrote it in a notebook. It was really benefitial for me not only in writing skill but also in speaking and presentation skills.
Second, reading novels helps students learn important lessons about life. The auther of a novel usually portrais the main concepts of life in his/her story. The auther tries to teach how to forgive and fight for independent, love and better life. Some novels have some degree of realism and are about the people who fell in love at an early age and got married. These novels are maily about the mistakes and failures in love and life. By reading these novels, students become aware of potential problems of love and early marriage.
In summary, I believe reading novels can increase students’ knowladge too. Students can learn many things from novels. They can improve their writing skill by reading novels. Moreover, they learn important lessons about life such as possible problems of early marriage. In short, the lessons from novels are usefull for students in their life.
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- states that R. robustus could not activtly hunt the dinosaur in its stomach for three reasons 60
- which one do you prefer before taking a vacation?Reading about places online or discussing them with someone who has visited the proposed places. 73
- which one do you prefer before taking a vacation?Reading about places online or discussing them with someone who has visited the proposed places. 73
- Some people believe that thechnology has made children less creative than they were in the past 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...resting and poetic sentences in novels. Also novels usually contain beautiful descri...
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Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...udents intrested in writing and poetry. When I was fifteen I read some famous novels...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'read'?
Suggestion: read
...riting and poetry. When I was fifteen I read some famous novels in my leisure times....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, i think, in short, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03669724771 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50867063395 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48623853211 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2688526782 48.9658058833 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.625 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.625 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298297829759 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101058996803 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813659857208 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208257522858 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112935799962 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.