Teachers are not as important as they used to be because of the choice of other alternatives for students, such as online teaching.
To what extent to do you agree or disagree?
In my point of view, teachers are still tremendously relevant for students in these days. All changes that are happening in learning process lately are making them even more important for this. Then, I would say that I disagree with that statement a hundred percent. Actually, teachers are more needed than ever.
Indeed, students today are multifocal, with many alternatives and many activities for their brains at the same time. They are profoundly accustomed with multimedia information, with charts, videos, songs and interactions. So, their lives were shaped by technology and they really enjoy to learn with it. However, all these technological skills bring among them a dark side as well, problems with concentration, discipline and motivation are common nowadays and professors can guide them through all these messy information and organize them properly.
In other hand, in the past, people were more concentrated and more disciplined, and teachers were helpful either. Even to teach people interested and dedicated, they need to set up a method to share knowledge as best possible. But I have to admit that in the past, interaction were more personal. By this I mean that technology is transforming interactions between people, making easier contact between people far from each other. So, in fact, because of this change, teachers and students were closer than today, because they used to be in the same physical place.
There is a tendency to think that online teaching is making teachers old. Otherwise, I would argue that this is making possible knowledge reach unthinkable places for past realities. This fact is strengthening the profession and make them even more helpful worldwide. For instance, we’ve seen entire communities in third world, especially in Middle Africa, skipping starvation and poverty because of incredible kind of information that are achieving that people through the Internet.
Therefore, in my opinion, professors will always be extremely needed around the world and all these technology will only contribute for their job. All changes in learning process are unstoppable and we all will need the teachers to guide us to a better and more included world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy learning'.
Suggestion: enjoy learning
...re shaped by technology and they really enjoy to learn with it. However, all these technologic...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chers were helpful either. Even to teach people interested and dedicated, they ne...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...tremely needed around the world and all these technology will only contribute for their job. All...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, third, well, for instance, i mean, in fact, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34097421203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82467723602 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558739255014 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.013213786 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1052631579 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146092085921 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465513097219 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038581738683 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799754718685 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309965044835 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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