The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
After the 20th century, the amount of nuclear family has increased, finally, the form of the family occupies the majority rate in many countries such as United States, Canada, and Japan.
There is the question that is the extended family less important now than it was in the past.
I strongly disagree with the question. I would like to explain the reasons to support my opinion.
What are the family’s roles? Some people say that the important roles of the family are that keeping the children in the safe area, taking care of them, telling the knowledge and traditional culture to the next generation. In the point that tells the wisdom of the culture, only grandparents can tell the story of the history of the family to children since they have experienced in real time.The stories from the grandparents are priceless. They can tell how societies have changed, what is the family, and the importance of the traditional culture. They help a lot to children and young people to compose their identities that who they are.
The communication with the extended family is really important for kids and young people. For children, the communicating with them is really good training to get along with the adults and people of the different generation. They can learn how to greet with new people, find common topics which they are interested in and talk them nicely. For young people, they get the experience that how to treat babies and kids. It will help them when they will get the child in the future because they already know how to take care of the baby.
In conclusion, the importance of the extended family is as same as it was in the past. The extended family works as important roles for especially young kids and young adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ince they have experienced in real time.The stories from the grandparents are price...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8178807947 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53085212738 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490066225166 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2286159656 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212656722493 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10056383402 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168353306754 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185307864917 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.223050928668 0.0645574589148 346% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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