Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Blood sports is a competition in which two animals fight to entertain spectators and usually one of the fighters die due to injuries. Recently, advocates of animal rights and even ordinary people run campaigns to stop this unethical activity and they have become voice of animals for eradicating such a disgusting game. In my opinion, sport’s aim is health but blood sport is totally against it and should be abolished all over the world.
Train animals to fight each other has been an activity for hundred years and there are people who spend lots of money to watch and even gambling on it. Animals are forced to eat drugs, so they can resist for longer hours. In this way, viewers would be stimulated and the adrenalin would increase in their blood and make them feel satisfied. Competitors like hens or dogs would drawn in their blood to keep people amused and earn money for their owners.
However, violent actions against animals and detrimental effect of these game should strictly be considered. Firstly, animal would suffer lots of pain for viewer’s delicacy, for example, trainers would feed them if they attack the opponent and usually they would die because of excruciating pain and injuries. Secondly, these bloody action would have negative consequences on the mind of observers and promote violent behavior among people. Especially due to lack of control and no age limit, kids are allowed to watch which would definitely have effect on their psyche and cause aggressive reaction.
I personally believe governments could pass law with heavy punishments for those who organize these game. Also, media could raise moral value among citizen and ask them to report if it happened.
In conclusion, blood sports is an immoral activity and authorities should take serious steps to stop it for the sake of animals and also mental health of the society.
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ght each other has been an activity for hundred years and there are people who spend lo...
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Message: Did you mean 'have drawn' or 'draw'?
Suggestion: have drawn; draw
...ed. Competitors like hens or dogs would drawn in their blood to keep people amused an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04838709677 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.544392541 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1705850725 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.785714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266581432497 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914428841879 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650924191577 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156938295334 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894992324352 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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