The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate the ages of people who lived in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and who will live there in 2050.Overall, it is clear that the rate of people(15-59 years) is expected to rise to the largest among three kinds of population in 2050 in Yemen while that is projected to decline but still the biggest in Italy.
Starting with Italy, the proportion of people (0-14 years) is expected to rise from 46.3% in 2000 to 57.3%, the largest number in 2050. The same trend can also be seen in the figure for people (60+ years), but it is predicted to increase less significantly to 5.7% in 2050. However, the percentage of people (0-14 years) is forecast to decrease from the largest number (50.1%) in 2000 to 37.0% in 2050.
Turning now to the Italy, the rate of 15-59 year’s old people is predicted to drop from the biggest number (61.6%) in 2000 to 46.2% in 2050, but still the largest data. The similar trend also appears in the figure for 0-14 year’s old people, but it is projected to dip less significantly from 14.3% to 11.5%, both the smallest number in 2000 and in 2050. However, the rate of 60+ year’s old people is predicted to climb to 42.3% in 2050.
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- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...in 2000 and who will live there in 2050.Overall, it is clear that the rate of people15-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49065420561 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43708949122 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429906542056 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.072848391 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.285714286 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23137309112 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112139407378 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793401395711 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178402054494 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838809242316 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.87 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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