Over the last half century, the pace of population aging has accelerated beyond our widest expectations. Surprisingly, in some countries, the population of young adults exceeds the older ones, in which situation I consider advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Of course, increased number of young people would give rise to a series of questions. For instance, even in a less aging country like China, short supply of jobs contrasts labor storage. Consequently, young job hunters find positions occupied with middle-aged people who are preferred for their skillfulness and experiences. What’s more, young women are less welcome for their future maternity leaves. Apart from employment, education, especially quantity and quality of higher education is in urgent need of improvements.
Despite all above, labor insufficiency is plaguing countries where the aging phenomenon of population is severe, thus, large amount of young adults mean that labor will be in abundance in the future, which is one of the greatest benefits. And from my perspective, development problems must be solved by development. As young adults are healthy and strong, there will be considerably less financial burdens on pensions and social medical system, which, can just compensate the lack of education funds. Meanwhile, social progress and technology advance will provide more jobs in return. Though more wisdom and knowledgeable, the development of science and society, knowledge transmission are hugely dependant on youth.
An old saying in china goes like this-the young is strong, the country is strong. With the efforts of government and elderly, a rich of young generation will finally guarantee a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 698, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...iety, knowledge transmission are hugely dependant on youth. An old saying in china goe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62790697674 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03155291594 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658914728682 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5466964349 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170389489274 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520958122482 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589232352206 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105933298257 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461029663385 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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