Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Majority of the people tend to believe that members of modern society have an abundance of possibilities and can go in whatever direction they choose. However, from my point of view, this idea can be mainly applied to the minority of the people occupying the Earth at the moment.
One of the main arguments in favor of an opinion that people have plenty of opportunities to choose from is usually a huge variety of entertainment resources and leisure activities. Even if this belief is based on some kind of logic, it is still important to understand that life is not wholly about the way we spend our free time. There are some things which have a more significant role in the everyday life of typical human sapience: education, profession, family life.
First of all, saying that people living nowadays have a lot of things to choose from seems to me as an exaggeration, while there are still places where human rights and freedom are violated. In some countries, a person can not even choose whom he or she gets married to. In other ones, a huge part of the society is deprived of a right to choose the professional route he or she would like to pursue. For example, women in a lot of Arabic countries have almost no opportunities to lead the life of an entrepreneur or to become a scientist. Bearing that in mind, it is simply arrogant to say that people suffer from too many choices.
In conclusion, I want to say that even if some areas of our life is full of different options it does not mean that we can claim ourselves suffocating from a fullness of choices. There is still a lot of work to be done for all of the people to have the freedom of choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e is still a lot of work to be done for all of the people to have the freedom of choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49342105263 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62663186317 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.5297778092 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193112345329 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696911840503 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396877780482 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115576928512 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0055192101449 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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