The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.
Typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing
The process chart highlights various steps which are used for manufacturing consumer's goods and also reflects the information feedback of procedure . In chart, black line show the procedure and blue line indicate the feedback of information.
On the first stage of process, components,manufacturing for goods and row material are stored. The further step is related to design, the product is designed by planning, assembly, inspection and testing. Now product is tested after design.
Shifting attention to further details, on the starting of third step,after testing, product is enabled for packing due to market research. By advising ,goods are despatched and send to markets for sales.
overall, on analysing the data, it is apparent that the whole procedure is done with four stages, which are essential to be carried out for produce the goods for consumers because without this sequence the whole process become spoil.
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...ich are used for manufacturing consumers goods and also reflects the information...
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...d for manufacturing consumers goods and also reflects the information feedback ...
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...goods and also reflects the information feedback of procedure . In chart, black ...
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...s the information feedback of procedure . In chart, black line show the procedure...
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...n the first stage of process, components,manufacturing for goods and row material are stored. ...
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...r step is related to design, the product is designed by planning, assembly, inspe...
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...r details, on the starting of third step,after testing, product is enabled for packing...
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...king due to market research. By advising ,goods are despatched and send to markets...
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...goods are despatched and send to markets for sales. overall, on analysing the d...
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...ential to be carried out for produce the goods for consumers because without this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43055555556 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06150973458 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0097305291 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204898256006 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832287185557 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080039619688 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10973744684 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023372628655 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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