Law has a greater influence on the holistic development of a country and social fabric for the citizens. Proponents are debating over this phenomenon that law changes human behavior. Many believe that law has a paramount impact on social norms and in turns changes human behavior, however, others hold opposite views stating that it does not hold significant importance in changing the behavior of humans. In this article, I will analyze both the side before deriving a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in the majority of countries, people follow laws due to avoid heavy fine imposed by federal agencies. For instance, driving a car comes with many traffic laws which need to abided by the driver of the vehicle. They will put on a seat belt and follow the traffic signals. This they will do to avoid mammoth fine and imprisonment. If given a choice a good amount of the population would not like to follow the traffic rules. Thus, it does not change human behavior.
On the other hand, a majority of the citizens are trying to become good citizens of the country and they imbibed by the laws which take forms of habit and have the deepest impact on their thought process and changes their behavior. For example, in countries like the United States of America becomes great due to its citizens' positive behaviors towards legislative laws.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that the law certainly changes human behavior either due to a fear of severe punishment or due to eager to become a responsible citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to avoid mammoth fine and imprisonment. If given a choice a good amount of the pop...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...of severe punishment or due to eager to become a responsible citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89312977099 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56510131771 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4161932782 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6153846154 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255207306804 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954212510205 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896259277803 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153511573541 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509511486684 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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