Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer
nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the
responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their
citizens themselves?
There is much more gross income difference between different countries in the world.Wealthy nation should assist poorer countries in the form of food or education and its responsibility of government to provide basic necessities of life to their citizen.In this essay we will discuss moral duty of rich countries and sole responsibility of institution to accommodate their needs.
My argued that well off nations ought to help poorer one in term of meal and education.Although, main cause of poor situation of country is lack of education and unemployment.Despite the fact that many international NGOs working in poor countries but rate of poverty is increasing.Statistics shows that ratio of poverty increase fifteen percent in previous decade.Rich countries could give its models of infrastructure to learn from their experience how they made progress.these countries made investment in poorer ones for permanent eradication of poverty .In my point of view financial assistance is not solution of problem.For example China made five million dollar investment in our country which bring jobs and in turn prosperity of nation.
Although,basically institution should have provide all the necessities to their citizen.The government should provide all education ,health and employment opportunities to peoples.Creation of new jobs is main thing which bring country progress and economic growth.Many highly qualified peoples are unemployed which discourage the other from education.Round the globe employment rate is very low five percent decrease in job seeking.Each year more than fifty million students complete graduation but employments which create each successive year are only fifty thousand.Government should made policies and also used other developed countries as roll model.
In this essay we discussed the institution basic responsibilities and main causes of poverty in third world countries.Besides this other first world countries should provide assistance and support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, third, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83161512027 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64103901731 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.751428567 49.4020404114 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 424.25 106.682146367 398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159410329547 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100732165768 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520703742263 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100732165768 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520703742263 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 13.0946893788 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.53 50.2224549098 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.72 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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