some believe that modern technology has made people less socially active, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Modern technology has played a pivotal role in connecting the unconnected. Although some people say that using the latest technology tools have made masses socially less active however there are others who disagree. In my opinion with the advent of technology and the various platforms available today have made people more social than ever. In the below paragraphs I discuss both views and conclude with my opinion.
Firstly as we are going through an era of technology advancement social platform and applications like Facebook, Orkut and Instagram have provided people with a means to be socially active with the friends and families who stay far away. Additionally, these platforms allow people to post their views on any contentious topic like sports, politics etc. which other users on the platform can view and accordingly comment. For instance, in a recent survey done by Times global more users are becoming socially active due to the presence of social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram.
Despite an increase in the usage of modern gadgets to remain socially active, a section of society believes in the old school of thought who prefer to use traditional way to remain socially active which is by attending social events like parties, gatherings and functions. They believe that the use of modern gadgets and applications like Facebook, Skype is making people lazy and socially less active. For instance, in a recent survey done economic times, it was published that people who use modern technology tools are becoming socially less active and this trend is on common amongst the youth.
To conclude though the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, modern technology acts a bridge in making people socially active around the globe, therefore, it is a must for people to use modern gadgets and plat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20066889632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64443827097 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8008027688 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350466842219 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131269835272 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741734355537 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223011041652 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922576870141 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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