Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how the governments should measure their country's progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I strongly believe that other measures of progress are just important.
There are three keys reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creations, a high level of employment and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a country with high avenues can invest in the country's transport systems, its hospitals and its education. Last but not least, a strong economy can help a country to stand on the global stage, in term of its political influence and trading power.
However, i would side with people who argue that other forms of progress are as significant as economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we can consider the area of social justice, human rights, and education. For example, the government should make effort to bridge the gap between the rich and the poor and a education should not be the monopoly of the rich. Perhaps, another key consideration when judging the development of a modern country is how well that country protect the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation can be measured by looking at the healthcare, well-being and happiness of its residents. Take China as a example, that country has solely focused on economic progress recently. As a consequence, that country is facing with manifold environmental issues such as polluted air and water which leads to many health problems.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key matter of a country success, but social , environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33840304183 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04322057368 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2491844826 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155416785804 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591691703957 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060859970968 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988668359304 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662710077915 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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