Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and refraining to do something new are preferred by several people. Others, nevertheless, think that one of the good things in life is to alter our previous habit. This essay will explain both points of view.
As an endeavour to keep doing the similar routine and refraining new experiences, numerous masses consider that it is better for staying at their comfort zone rather than change it to a new one. There are three reasons of this argument. First and foremost, those people feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do a new thing. Second but not less crucial, those masses are inactive and captivated to try some things that they have previously never done. Last but not least, all of them are too enjoy of their current activity which is ,in the end, making them merely to stay at their position.
Nonetheless, the other people would rather do a new experience instead of practicing the same routine. These people also have their own reasons. They, firstly, have an enormous curiosity about new things. Secondly, these masses are too fascinated to go and feel new experiences and conditions. They, thirdly, simply want to go out of their comfort zone because they used to learn something from this activity. Therefore, they determined to try something that they have never done.
By way of conclusion, I do appreciate the opposing view which preferred to keep the same routines. Nevertheless, in my perspective, an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for every person who wants to find the real personality of themselves because all of us are going to find countless precious things such as meeting various people from different background, facing unexpected occurrence and learning how to struggle in new circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to enjoy'?
Suggestion: to enjoy
...ne. Last but not least, all of them are too enjoy of their current activity which is ,in ...
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Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...Last but not least, all of them are too enjoy of their current activity which is ,in ...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...enjoy of their current activity which is ,in the end, making them merely to stay a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74994766926 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3363292177 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205113743322 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669928882517 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594843495562 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134139269586 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536870238826 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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