It has recently been announced that new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
Jonny always has a statement he says that “in crowd societies or places people can make more money. So, more money means better life. Without money nobody can support the life. Built a restaurant near my home is nice idea and I support this opinion. However, built a restaurant near my home has some advantages like, job creation, eating and entertainment, arrange meetings. However, I love this opinion that government or private sectors built a restaurant near my home and I don’t like anybody reject this idea.
First, if government or private sectors built a restaurant near my home. So, it is nice opinion. In fact, they create some jobs for my neighbors who are jobless. So, I believe that is an opportunity for people. For instance, a business women built a restaurant near my home. After, accomplished of the restaurant they hired 20 people for her restaurant. So, it means job creation and it is the best opinion and I love her jobs and she admired by people for her jobs. So, I believe she did great and I strongly support her job. Built a restaurant in my neighborhood.
Second, if people built restaurant near my home I admire them it is a chance to do some entertain with my friends every night I can visit them in diner. However, it is a fan time. I love this idea. On the other hand, it is joyful to eat and speak with close friends. For instance, I eat at restaurant with my friends every nights near my home. So, I enjoy meal with friends. We can Eating, laughing and spend more time to gather.so, I strongly believe that they built a restaurant in my neighborhood.
Last but not least, another importance of restaurant is in my neighborhood. I can arrange my meetings on their. However, I have a lot meetings and sometime I forget to eat or drink a coffee. When people arrange their meeting in restaurants they can eat some food on their and they can save their time. For instance, when I have meeting. So, I prefer to do that on the restaurant, because me and my friends after meeting we can eat their and no need to find another place for eating dinner or launch. So, it is helpful for me to save more time. So, I love this idea and I prefer to build a restaurant in my neighborhood.
Conclusion, my people have a proverb that say “coin has two sides” built a restaurant in my neighborhood has some advantages. However, they can create some jobs for my neighbors or other people it means exchange of money, eating and entertainment. So, it means we can eat and drink with friend ti is joyful time and some people love this idea and we can arrange or meeting in restaurant in our neighborhood. However, I prefer that they built a restaurant near my home or neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...'t like anybody reject this idea. First, if government or private sectors ...
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Suggestion: woman
...ty for people. For instance, a business women built a restaurant near my home. After,...
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Suggestion:
...Built a restaurant in my neighborhood. Second, if people built restaurant near ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'eat'
Suggestion: Eat
.... So, I enjoy meal with friends. We can Eating, laughing and spend more time to gather...
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...built a restaurant in my neighborhood. Last but not least, another importance o...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it is helpful for me to save more time. So, I love this idea and I prefer to build...
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...build a restaurant in my neighborhood. Conclusion, my people have a proverb tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56557377049 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75316814404 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.366803278689 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7098645738 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5294117647 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3529411765 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26470588235 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135299334444 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534933276198 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607813769316 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100332806464 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218027431169 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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