There are many different types of music in the world today. Why we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
In the present scenario, people listen to music according to their choices and tastes. Music has now become one of the major hobbies for the denizens to overcome the stress. In my opinion, traditional music plays a vital role to retain the value of history and culture of a county for the upcoming generations.
To begin with, in today’s hectic life, music is necessary for people to get relief from their problems occurring in daily routine. Music can break the monotony of life and it will help denizens to start their new tasks with fresh mind. Apart from this, on many occasions like marriages and festivals, music enhances the charm of those junctures and helps to make unforgettable memories for someone. Additionally, rich lyrics can improve the intellectual level and it is often said that a person could be judged by the types of music he listen to.
Moving further, traditional music is an integral part of the human expression that is unable to separate from people’s lives even if there is the various evolution of music. Traditional music is the root of the country’s history, culture, customs, and heritage things because there are plenty of songs which illustrate the elite history of some festivals. For instance, in India, some festivals such as Diwali and Holi have their own songs and while listening to these songs, it will boost the knowledge of new generation about the history and importance of festivals.
In conclusion, traditional music makes folk proud about their culture and it helps to reduce the religious gap between the baby-boomers and the generation of twenty-first century.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13059701493 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77466460036 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8961461715 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307067999106 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125081837064 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043260687151 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185473891927 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040480608757 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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