Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been an animated discussion about whether or not a steady rise in social media usage brings more drawbacks than merits. I agree with both side of the argument. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of this trend.
On the positive side, firstly, people can share their issues with the entire nation in order to get help. Whether it is helping in terms of money or when it comes to advice, they can get it fast from numerous social media users. A further advantage of the social media is that you can get the facts and true information by doing some research on social media as nearly all forms of media and the press such as television, newspapers, internet articles and so on are still affected by government control.
On the negative side, the popularity of social media also represents some notable drawbacks. To begin with, personal data and privacy can easily be hacked and shared on the internet. Which can make financial losses and loss to personal life. What is also shortcoming is cyberbullying. Being the victim of a cyberbullying can take a tremendous toll on a person emotionally and psychologically. It can render a person helpless and feeling violated.
In conclusion, using social media can be a smart decision. However, there are disadvantages that should be weighed carefully against the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78263464284 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6853560617 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312829863787 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927532933563 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103806052931 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179618516639 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766052420018 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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