Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, social media is used by many people regardless of age.
Perhaps the older people are not too difficult to use, and many people are using it, and there are side effects.
My opinion is that social media has more advantages. Because social media allows you to stay in touch with friends and listen to special news regardless of your distance. I can even follow my favorite stars.
Also, new information is always uploaded quickly. For example, new events in stores in your area. People in the same area can share information or make new friends.
Social media can open the way for new industries. People can share their favorite restaurants and stories through Twitter or Facebook, but they also advertise various products. Companies can promote new brands in brand companies by uploading their brand image. Since new information is always on the rise, new trailers such as cell phones, music and movies will be released and new buyers can be acquired quickly.
Social media is likely to be exposed to adult sites as children are easily accessible to a variety of ages.
Workers may also be stressed out of work beyond the time they work through their work colleagues and communities.
It is also possible for anyone to find personal information. People who do not know information such as where they live and where they work can also be identified.
In conclusion, social media can be used to share good memories with friends and to get useful information for individuals if they use other disadvantages carefully without exposing information they do not want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60402272329 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3739223272 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6470588235 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211643781741 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846063589018 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935931524946 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111210510089 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923200989687 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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