Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Education is an important aspect of personality development. Along with curricular activities universities and colleges should encourage their students to do some extra curricular activities also. It will help not only in student's personality development but also development of country. Though I agree to some extent with this recomendation, university should not make it compulsory for all the students to spend one semester studying in foreign country.
Every country has unique infrastructure and have a cultural difference. There are many advantages of this recomendation for example if student goes to a foreign country, He/she will observe how a basic procedures are followed in a foreign country. A student can apply for a course in a university of that country. Even though technical course is similar in both the countries but the way their curriculam is designed , their process of taeching or the ways of assesment may differ from the ways in his/her own country. After spending one semester in a foreign country, a student can submit his or her analysis of experience and give some suggestions to university. It will help university to improve.
Secondly, apart from appearing for a course in a foreign university, overall living experience in a foreign countries also help to understand where our own country needs improvement. Overall infrastructure of cities, cleanliness, law and order, quality of roads, average living cost for people and its management. It will help to find improvement areas for development of own country.
However, it is important to also check for budget requirement for this recommendation. As it says it should require their students to spend one semester in a foreign country. It sounds like it should be compulsory for all the students studying in that university. The cost of study one semester for each student might be too much and not possible to afford. If cost of student studying for one semester is out of budget then one industrial tour can be planned for students. This will also help to some extent.
So to conclude, even if it is advantageous for country considering a cost required for this recommendation is important. If not possible to send a student for a whole semester, an educational or industriaol tour to foreign country will also beneficial to some extent.
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- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... to do some extra curricular activities also. It will help not only in students pers...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'procedure'?
Suggestion: procedure
...ountry, He/she will observe how a basic procedures are followed in a foreign country. A st...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...but the way their curriculam is designed , their process of taeching or the ways o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s to university. It will help university to improve. Secondly, apart from appe...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
... overall living experience in a foreign countries also help to understand where our own c...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...et requirement for this recommendation. As it says it should require their student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19363395225 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11033716033 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458885941645 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8966635503 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2380952381 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372011433845 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131086243782 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144095141039 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217519282211 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129200715293 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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