Schools should do more to prepare students for the non-academic aspects of adulthood.
if we go about thousand years back and ask anyone, education would be more about grooming an individual how to live and survive in this planet. education, nowadays, is all about getting an academic degree.
I totally agree with the fact that schools should do more regarding the non-academic aspects of life. The kind of education given in schools today do not teach a student, for example, how to deal with a situation in which one's embarrassing photos reach you through social media, how to deal with the mental stress during work, how to confront a person who just robs you and how to make yourself healthy physically.
These are the examples of situations that every teenager might face in his/her adulthood, or maybe even in the teenage. I have myself been in such situations and have wondered what to do. All my years of education did not help me. what's its true purpose then?
Not just this, schools should also encourage students to learn beyond classrooms by giving them opportunities that can shape their future. All those classroom competition of marks and grades have just left them with their competitive nature even in their adulthood. Everyday, one competes against another. Publishing research work has become a competition. collaboration has reduced, but what people are more interested is to increase their number of publications to make name of their own or their own organization.
However, if their schools had given up on their classroom based learning and focused on taking them outside to industries or give them extra-curricular activities, giving them a collaborative project work, things might have changed. These things very much reflect on a person's behaviour and how he can turn out to be as an adult.
To conclude, students should be made realized that it is not solely the academic part that matters in an education, which is reflected as an end result, but the journey itself matters. The journey teaches one a lot. if it does not include teaching students how to be responsible and face challenges in their adulthood, then all we would see is a generation that is even worse than the millennial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00278551532 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7760703382 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57938718663 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.7941413498 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7777777778 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218879176921 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602653842957 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945301979618 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972823198468 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761466940556 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.