The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Gone are the times when people used to pursue education to land on a high-paying job. Over the years, the education system is changing. it has started to play a major role in enhancing the knowledge of a student rather than focusing on only providing basic skills necessary to sustain in the real world. In a recent survey conducted, it was observed that forty percent of adults undertake courses out of interest in subject. almost a similar amount of people pursue studies to gain qualifications and aiming to increase their chances of promotion, to meet new people and to shift jobs. only about twenty two percentage of students take them to help themselves achieve their desired job. One of the most interesting fact is that, twelve percent of students take courses just because they enjoy studying. The research also revealed some thoughts of people regarding how much of the cost should be shared and by whom. The study tells that people believe that only forty percent of the cost of the course should be shared by the individual and the rest almost equally contributed by taxpayers and employer.
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- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.Summarise the information by selecting and r 56
- In order to help small businesses thrive government should play a minimal role in private business matters 30
- In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the times when people used to pursue ed...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ears, the education system is changing. it has started to play a major role in enh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Almost
...ake courses out of interest in subject. almost a similar amount of people pursue studi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
..., to meet new people and to shift jobs. only about twenty two percentage of students...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-two
...ew people and to shift jobs. only about twenty two percentage of students take them to hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8670212766 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55125702425 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8903985229 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108692867262 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430788387266 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383455372678 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108692867262 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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