In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, although we can see substantial improvement in agriculture, many people from certain countries also struggle with a shortage of food. Both geographical and political factors caused this problem, which can be resolved by techniques and some NGOs.
From the geographical aspect, some countries are more easily to be suffered from extreme weather because of their geographical position. This means that their agriculture is too weak to support the food supply. For instance, some Africa counties are located in the deep desert where they even cannot cultivate any crops. Otherwise, some countries, like India, have to face extreme weather conditions, such as drought and flood which can quickly harm their whole agricultural system, especially when they should face the same difficult situation every year.
From the political aspect, there are many reasons responsible for the problem of hunger. Firstly, it is difficult to get enough food during the war. Those people who live in the Middle East area lack supplement of food due to the destruction of agriculture and transportation. Secondly, some countries impose a restriction to provide people with food, like North Korea. This causes a problem that people cannot get enough food without the leader's allowance.
Fortunately, new technology and active NGOs can partly deal with these problems. The government can invest a new agricultural system which is more suitable for its country, like Iran, which has a total different irrigation system used in the desert. In addition, NGOs also play an essential role in international help. They transfer food from different places and distribute food to somewhere needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...ople cannot get enough food without the leaders allowance. Fortunately, new technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46743295019 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82093310258 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5632834058 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132827561489 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466609195569 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468369359865 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954612589313 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671164926666 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.