More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?
Today’s diet consumption is affecting humans in terms of health and this number is increasing day by day and also, the solution is not coming from these scientific pills. It is believed by some individuals that traditional medicines should be allowed to cure patients. I completely disagree because old-style medicines are not manufactured with proper care and their action of curing is slow as compared with modern tablets.
Traditional medicines are effective but it needs time to cure the patient from diseases. The pace of killing infections is quite slow as linked with modern medicines and sometimes it cost the life of an individual. Which makes the situation worst, thus consuming such medicine is not full proof of improving health. For instance, homeopathy medicines require 1 week to control the nasal infections such as common cold as compare with modern medicines which require only one day.
Traditional medicines are not prepared in scientific manner besides bringing them back for the treatment purpose can create more problems. These medicines are not manufactured under proper hygiene practices, thus they possess risk of infections, and therefore the authority should not encourage traditional medicines in the market. Only few authority permit the use of such medicines around the globe.
In conclusion, although advanced treatments fail sometimes in recovering patients, but the impact of consuming old-date medicine by patients on getting better is even slow and poorer. In addition to that, these medicines are not prepared according to the science law. Hence, I believe that we should not encourage people to consume traditional medicines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'fail'.
Suggestion: sometimes fail
...onclusion, although advanced treatments fail sometimes in recovering patients, but the impact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46332046332 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85935946574 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0718809928 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24985685519 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872923440586 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494996614577 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141003815375 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382435515363 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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