Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
The world is changing drastically, now a days we are facing more environmental issues, increasing population and providing quality education. In this essay we will be talking about where my country stands in next decade with respect to these changes.
I am from Pakistan, in my country every year we face environmental change. Increasing pollution resulting in climate change is the main factor behind this. Every coming year weather will be unpredictable summers will get hotter, rising temperature. Winters will be colder, dropping temperatures. On the other hand, increase in population if we look at the statistics, in last 10 years the population has grown immensely. From year 2000 – 2010 the increase has been recorded 14% and year 2010 – 2020 estimated increase is 18%. The more population grows the more issues communities must face, in developing countries. Increase in population is directly proportional to education system. The quality of public funded schooling is below the mark which means in coming 10 years this needs to be improved
Governments needs to jump in and take the hold of environmental issues, should stop industries from producing carbon foot print and impose heavy fines on any violation. Increase in rapid population and the affects it is bringing on our economy should be made clear to people. If required ministry of health and education should sit together and suggest one child policy like china.
In conclusion I must say awareness is the key element to success. To succeed we need to bring awareness in people this can be done through advertisements, social campaign, etc
Governments should put more emphasis on awareness to people by advertisements or through social work,etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
The world is changing drastically, now a days we are facing more environmental issues...
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Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
The world is changing drastically, now a days we are facing more environmental issues...
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Line 2, column 798, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oming 10 years this needs to be improved Governments needs to jump in and take th...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...by advertisements or through social work,etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in conclusion, in fact, talking about, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23826714801 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95249921691 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6405529448 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248697859205 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837792880698 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608666873937 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113505113725 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951781285491 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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