People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?
Most people are enthusiastic in sports. Sports such as sky-diving and rock climbing are considered as dangerous according to some groups. I believe that such sports should not be banned because it will create a retaliation for dangerous sports enthusiast and entertainment seeker. This essay will discuss the categories of sports enthusiast and reasoning why not to ban any dangerous sports.
It is a common belief that most people try to do things which are forbidden by the authorities. Therefore, banning the dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing will definitely retaliate among the people. It is obvious that some people will even protest against the authorities to take back their decision on banning any kind of sports. Enthusiasm in sports is very important, and these sports are definitely for those people who like adventure in their life.
Secondly, to begin with the idea of entertainment, most of the people will not appreciate the banning of sports. Many people like to play different sports such as rock climbing which is also a healthy activity. People with different interests in sports may consider rock climbing as an entertainment. For example, I have never done rock climbing in my life and I have an ambition to do rock climbing once in my life, but a lot of people who have a wish list like me. So, if this sport will be banned people will never achieve their entertainment goals. Again, entertainment factor will be lacking in people as an after effect of banning this sport.
At last, I may conclude my point of view by stating that banning these dangerous sports will create lack of enthusiasm and entertainment in people. Therefore, it is not recommended to ban any sports however, precautionary measures such as life belts and safety equipment should be implemented by authorities while performing these dangerous sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...will create a retaliation for dangerous sports enthusiast and entertainment seeker. Th...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of people who have a wish list like me. So, if this sport will be banned people will n...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended banning'.
Suggestion: recommended banning
...ainment in people. Therefore, it is not recommended to ban any sports however, precautionary measu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08116883117 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88325398937 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461038961039 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9091192283 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473766364932 0.244688304435 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186318996021 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114706922659 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336090793824 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797065807251 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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