Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or a modern apartment?
Man is a wanderer. He travels from places to places, every day exploring new things. But ultimately he finds comfort in his own home. Everyone has a dream of their own house. Some people like to stay in traditional houses while others prefer a modern apartment. I wish to live in an apartment with advanced facilities, and there are many reasons for this.
Firstly, apartments are easy to maintain. A traditional house usually consumes a lot of space, and they are difficult to keep clean every day. On the other hand, apartments are comparatively smaller and compact, hence offers easy maintenance.
Secondly, a modern apartment can accommodate advanced facilities such as modular kitchen, space-saving cupboards, etc. These facilities can also be installed in a traditional house, but it will cost a lot of money because there may be a need for additional wiring or other extra requirements.
However, I cannot deny the fact that I feel an emotional connection with my ancestral home. Evenings there, are pleasant with a chat over tea with neighbors, and mornings there, are beautiful with the sound of birds. We can see a blending of nature with traditional homes while apartments stay excluded from nature.
Thus, in my opinion, people can choose a traditional home or a modern apartment according to their convenience. Ultimately, it is the people who live in a house transform it heaven or hell.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i feel, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0686695279 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94440620448 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62660944206 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0588636496 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8125 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261971232066 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774383973491 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775219881487 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145723724447 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684994583342 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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