More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, more and more people are choosing to have babies when they get a bit older than before. This phenomenon has several reasons concerned with the social and economic conditions we live in. While this may have some advantages, personally, I believe that the drawbacks far outweigh the benefits.
There are many causes for people to opt to have their first baby in a late age. The main cause is that most women nowadays have from 9 to 5 jobs. They choose to work for many reasons, even to feel satisfied about themselves when they achieve benefits for the society, or to fulfill their essential needs and to be able to pay for their bills. Eventually, they end up not having time to bring up a baby.
This situation may have some advantages to both the woman herself as well as the whole society. Firstly, when a woman decides to delay having a baby, she might go further in her career, and thus achieve what a woman with babies cannot. This will inevitably reflect on her self-esteem and increase her psychological well-being. Secondly, when women decide to become a part of the workforce for longer time, this will increase the total number of the workers increasing the productivity of the whole society.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, I believe that delaying the decision for a woman to have a baby may have negative consequences on her. It has been proven scientifically that women have a certain period of ovulation during their life. If a woman decided not to have her first baby until her thirties or even forties, she might lose her fertility by this age due to physiological changes. Moreover, even if she succeeded to have a baby in such late age, she would not be able to bring them up as she would do in her twenties, because she would be less healthy with less power.
In conclusion, due to the changes in social and economic conditions we live nowadays, many women choose not to have babies in earlier age, and rather they prefer to have careers. While the female may achieve some progress in her career, which would reflect on the country's economy, I am convinced that she should put into consideration the physiological changes that may hinder her to have babies or to bring them up in a later age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7048346056 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61445893116 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493638676845 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3868363507 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.764705882 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229894428538 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824103012955 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463508916289 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134200684684 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383172083045 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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