The graph below shows the numbers of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011
The line graph provides the detailed datas about how enquiries were sent to the Tourist Information office in three means transportation in particular city every month over the period of 6 months in 2011.
Overall, during the period, the enquiry numbers for in person and by letter show rapidly rose, while that for by telephone underwent quick drop. The number of questions sent by telephone experienced a dramatic decrease over 6 months.
In the beginning, the enquiries received by letter and telephone were the two highest, with roughly 900 enquiries and 800 enquiries respectively. However, in the next monhts, the number of enquiries that sent in person went up drastically and surpassed those of telephone and letter in March, with a double increase for just over 400 enquiries to 800 enquiries. In addition, there was hardly any change in the number of enquiries sent by telephone.
In the last three months, the number of requests received by letter still grew but led to that of in person, with around 1600 requests. Meanwhile, the request which sent by telephone received the lowest figure, at just under 400 whereas that of in person reached a peak point in the end of the period by approximately 2000 enquiries.
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- The graph below shows the numbers of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011 73
- Some people think that old houses should be knocked down to build new houses or apartment blocks. Others think that old houses should be protected because they are part of a nation’s history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people say it is the best for children to start learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Other people say it is better to start later. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 56
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Comments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, whereas, while, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99024390244 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71732275422 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8394865471 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313652225351 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13245689512 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961084624037 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194882489401 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110239407325 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.