Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
The woven basket found in the vicinity of the palea has been controversy regarding their origin since the recent archeological discovery found that the basket was also found in the lithos, an ancient village across the brim river from palea. due to no historical evidences of boat of palean people, it was considered that there was no possibility of crossing the brim river and thus woven basket was not originally belongs in palea. However, to support these argument, it should provide the two evidences.
First of all, there is no evidence about the boat in the palea that does not mean that they do not use to have boat for trade. Perhaps, the evidence regarding boat may be destroyed due to major flooding in the past. All the boat might get flooded at that time and no clue regarding boat of the palea. On the other hand, there is also huge possibility that they use boat of lithos for trade. if these were the reason behind the no evidence about the boat, it seriously weaken the conclusion of the argument that the basket was not belongs to the palea originally.
Secondly, brim river was broad and deep does not mean that it always have the same flow of water all season. it is possible that the water level of the river might get decreased in the summer and the winter and only higher level in the rainy season. thus, there was the highest possibility that they might trade the basket to people of lithos in the summer and the winter and the basket originally belongs to the palea.
The whole argument based on the unwarranted assumption. if the arguments provide the information against the above point that can hold the provided argument as true. As the argument cannot provide the evidences efficiently against the originality of the woven basket in palea, it cannot be considered as valid argument.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 318 350
No. of Characters: 1466 1500
No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.61 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.35 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.575 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.437 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
...llage across the brim river from palea. due to no historical evidences of boat of p...
^^^
Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...y belongs in palea. However, to support these argument, it should provide the two evidences. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...lea that does not mean that they do not use to have boat for trade. Perhaps, the ev...
^^^
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'boated'.
Suggestion: boated
...s not mean that they do not use to have boat for trade. Perhaps, the evidence regard...
^^^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...that they use boat of lithos for trade. if these were the reason behind the no evi...
^^
Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'weakens'?
Suggestion: weakens
...o evidence about the boat, it seriously weaken the conclusion of the argument that the...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...have the same flow of water all season. it is possible that the water level of the...
^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... only higher level in the rainy season. thus, there was the highest possibility that...
^^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...nt based on the unwarranted assumption. if the arguments provide the information a...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...annot be considered as valid argument.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 318.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72012578616 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40948025743 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433962264151 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1414834977 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 5.70786347227 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156445152792 0.218282227539 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508783612373 0.0743258471296 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536997584358 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918493527446 0.128457276422 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616974486312 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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