Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Consumer goods are the inevitable part of human's life in some form or the other, which have brought more comforts and effortless lifestyle for human. However, some hold the opinions that rise in sales of goods is an outcome of the advertisement, rather than real need of society. On the whole, I partially agree with the statement.
To begin with, advertisement is an important facet in making any company successful because advertisements make people to easily gravitate towards consumer goods on account of manifold reasons. Very first, companies surge the credibility of any newly upcoming good with the help of renowned personality, whereby people find goods more reliable as well as authentic, which tempted them to buy goods. Furthermore, without any thought for a once, many people merely purchase goods by seeing their favourite person, who endorse the product, which is partly erroneous. On the top of that, various discounts and offers on goods by advertisement lure people to take the best of opportunity, as they deem it more fruitful for them. In addition, the showcase of materialistic things in society may also be the reason for the people owing to which they swiftly buy goods, which are promoted by advertisement.
On the other hand, people now want to have a more lavishful lifestyle, and this lifestyle takes requirement of huge goods into consideration. Thus, people prefer to surround themselves with more number of goods as per their requirements due to plethora reasons. First and foremost, this hectic world has compelled people to have more goods, as they want to complete every single task in a quick span and this can be, somewhat, feasible by more number of goods. In addition, there are certain goods without which people can never live such as television, computers and so on, and here advertisement does not hold any position, as these goods are required necessarily by people. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that everyone wants to have a luxurious lifestyle, and for that people buy commonly used products, irrespective of any influence of advertisement.
In conclusion, it is an unequivocal that the goods are required by everyone, and thus people should use these goods in an optimum way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1043956044 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83187793966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2572297884 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153083336705 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626328364622 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359410528187 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102243781232 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465622394204 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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