You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that one of my apartment room has just been availble. Therefore, I will be extremely grateful if you could add it on your rooms list for a rent. I will be delighted to share some information about my flat. Firstly, it's located in the city center of London, the UK. Particularly on ST street, near the National Library. There is a very big shopping mall called Panoram shopping center in front of our buildings.
The room is relatively large and consist of one subroom which might be good as dress rooms or study room. Moreoever, the room has a balcony with spectacular city view. The room also, well equpied with new electrical devices such as TV, hair dryer and steam iron. The bed is queen size, so the new tenant will have comfortable sleep.
my roomate and I are looking for someone like us, quite and helpful. Furthermore, it's preferable to be male and have valied job and most significantly to be non smokers as we do not like it at all.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pping center in front of our buildings. The room is relatively large and consist...
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...tenant will have comfortable sleep. my roomate and I are looking for someone l...
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...on smokers as we do not like it at all. I look forward to receiving your respons...
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...ook forward to receiving your response. Best regards Bilal
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...ceiving your response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.640625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57790403093 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703125 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4791366528 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6428571429 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219373668962 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597363061071 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710496619912 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11456869119 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611167193624 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.