Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
To better contextualize the living habits, and aspirations of a society, a point of reference from the knowledge about well-known heroes or role models of a society would be helpful. This is because often times, a character in history comes to be known as a “hero” through generations by the word of mouth. Quite intuitively, we can expect the members of a community to be willing to transgress knowledge and stories that resemble pride of own culture, or ideals that they believe should be sources of inspiration or models to be replicated by the next generations. Hence, it is relevant to think that a society’s highest ideals would be embedded in their man and woman heroes and role models.
On the other hand, “understanding the character of a society” encompasses more than who the society has chosen to remember as their heroes and role models, which is likely to have created upon many factors, only one of which could be the society’s highest ideals, suggested by the claim and the reason given. I would argue that a society is made up of its human community, tangible and intangible environment, cultural heritage, norms, language, music, religion and many more that would collectively let us understand the values and unique identity of that society.
Therefore, looking at how the claim above is limiting to capture how else we could understand the character of a society, it firstly, limits the boundaries of heroes and role models, thus relevant ideals of society to human characters: men and women. For example, if we take the religious beliefs in India, we see that an animal like the cow is worshipped and is very integral to how the economic, and cultural habits of its smaller societies have been shaped. A similar example is seen by the animal characters that symbolize different identities and behavioral elements in the Chinese calendar as well.
While this does not deny the importance of significant human figures in each culture such as Gandhi, or Chinese Emperor’s, the nonhumane culture of societies is crucial to complement a community’s identity.
Moreover, none of these symbols are always the representative of the highest ideals. Sometimes cultures can choose to praise a person, a “hero”, or a symbol to exemplify the opposite of the highest ideal.
Another complexity involved in the claim is caused by the word selection of “the best way”. Here, it is very ambiguous as to who determines the best way to understand a society. The claim lacks a trajectory. In different circumstances, the better way to approach our analysis of one culture might vary. Such that to understand a society’s religious beliefs, a society’s economic activities, a society’s political identity different factors across their history might be considered. And if all of these factors are agreed to make up the overall character of a society –religion, culture, politics, etc- then the presence of a “best” way to understand a society’s character itself might not exist.
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- “In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the sta 62
- Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.Write a response 83
- “In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the sta 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25760649087 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28305529677 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509127789047 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 836.1 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6863451324 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3888888889 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357662127328 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112557615037 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080385493136 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177427804195 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824333596153 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.