In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.
The author of the passage is making unjust claims based upon faulty reasoning to come to conclusion that thr city government should devote more money in riverside recreational facilities.
Firstly the author has completely failed to mention regarding the survey which concluded that water sports is considered as favourite among their recerational activities as their is no specific information about the count of the people in survey neither we know when the survey was conducted. Furthermore the passage assumes that survey was conducted among the group of young members of society as elderly people might not be interested in swimming or boating.
Furthermore the author claims that the Mason river is hardly used for pursuits without any feasible reasoioning. The river might be polluted with the factory waste ejected from nearyby areas or the river might be overpolluted with checmicals, we are not clear about such rarely usages of Mason River. Neverthelesss the author claims that city part departments devotes little of its budget to maintain recreational facilities, the author here completely fails to consider that the economy of the mason city might be in harsh state or the city park department might have ssuffered some kind of financial crises. The passage further claims that there have been complaints from the residents regarding the quality of water and the water smell, chances that very few people might be complaining such issues or each individual complains the same issue is surely unknown.
Furthermore high growth of algae or release of drainage water from nearby slums migth also produce such kind of pungent smell. The author further claims that the state has acconunced plans to clean up Mason river, author here fails to consider the economical situation of the state, Nevertheless we don't have any information regarding the plans announced by the state whether those plans will be executed monthly or on annually basis. Based upon the above faulty author further concludes that the use of Mason river for water sports is going o increase. Chances are that people might loose their interest in water sports or any nearby river migth get more popularity than Mason river the author completely ignores such cases. Despite such issues the author concludes thar thr city government should devote more money in the years budget to riverside recreational facilities. The city government might be in an financial crisis or might have completely ran out of the annual budget in city planning. The author completey disregards such cases.
To conclude with the author of the passage has made a wide range of assumption based upon faulty reasioning to conclude the fact that state should contribute more money in riverside recreational facilities so that more people would happily enjoy water sports. A wide careful exploration reagrding various aspects should be conducted before making any such conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author of the passage is making unjust claims based upon faulty reasoning to come to conclusion that thr city government should devote more money in riverside recreational facilities.
Error: thr Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Firstly the author has completely failed to mention regarding the survey which concluded that water sports is considered as favourite among their recerational activities as their is no specific information about the count of the people in survey neither we know when the survey was conducted.
Error: recerational Suggestion: recreational
Error: favourite Suggestion: favorite
Sentence: Furthermore the author claims that the Mason river is hardly used for pursuits without any feasible reasoioning.
Error: reasoioning Suggestion: reasoning
Sentence: The river might be polluted with the factory waste ejected from nearyby areas or the river might be overpolluted with checmicals, we are not clear about such rarely usages of Mason River.
Error: overpolluted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: checmicals Suggestion: chemicals
Error: nearyby Suggestion: nearby
Sentence: Neverthelesss the author claims that city part departments devotes little of its budget to maintain recreational facilities, the author here completely fails to consider that the economy of the mason city might be in harsh state or the city park department might have ssuffered some kind of financial crises.
Error: ssuffered Suggestion: suffered
Sentence: Furthermore high growth of algae or release of drainage water from nearby slums migth also produce such kind of pungent smell.
Error: migth Suggestion: might
Sentence: The author further claims that the state has acconunced plans to clean up Mason river, author here fails to consider the economical situation of the state, Nevertheless we don't have any information regarding the plans announced by the state whether those plans will be executed monthly or on annually basis.
Error: acconunced Suggestion: accounted
Sentence: Chances are that people might loose their interest in water sports or any nearby river migth get more popularity than Mason river the author completely ignores such cases.
Error: migth Suggestion: might
Sentence: Despite such issues the author concludes thar thr city government should devote more money in the years budget to riverside recreational facilities.
Error: thar Suggestion: than
Error: thr Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The author completey disregards such cases.
Error: completey Suggestion: complete
Sentence: To conclude with the author of the passage has made a wide range of assumption based upon faulty reasioning to conclude the fact that state should contribute more money in riverside recreational facilities so that more people would happily enjoy water sports.
Error: reasioning Suggestion: reasoning
Sentence: A wide careful exploration reagrding various aspects should be conducted before making any such conclusion.
Error: reagrding Suggestion: regarding
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 469 350
No. of Characters: 2436 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.654 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.194 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.584 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 179 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.312 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.731 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.378 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... among their recerational activities as their is no specific information about the co...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... we know when the survey was conducted. Furthermore the passage assumes that survey was con...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t be interested in swimming or boating. Furthermore the author claims that the Mason river ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 461, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...t be interested in swimming or boating. Furthermore the author claims that the Mason river ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1326, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...lains the same issue is surely unknown. Furthermore high growth of algae or release of drai...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1574, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...iver, author here fails to consider the economical situation of the state, Nevertheless we...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1625, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...situation of the state, Nevertheless we dont have any information regarding the plan...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1910, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...increase. Chances are that people might loose their interest in water sports or any n...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 2233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lities. The city government might be in an financial crisis or might have complete...
^^
Line 2, column 2278, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...nancial crisis or might have completely ran out of the annual budget in city planni...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 468.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26282051282 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62130896381 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467948717949 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 705.55239521 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7915634484 57.8364921388 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.9375 119.503703932 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 23.324526521 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241345559434 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868803230077 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668612568912 0.0701772020484 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126450878044 0.128457276422 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976905728649 0.0628817314937 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.3799401198 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.3550499002 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 98.500998004 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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